Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments. Positive - something done well Thoughtful - a sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
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Tēnā koe Lyrick,
ReplyDeleteNgā mihi ki a koe - Great effort
Ngā āhuatanga e rata ana ki awau - Things I enjoyed
1. Topic related words, e.g., Box of slime, as you described your list
Ngā āhuatanga hei whakawhanake - Things to develop
1. Use sentences for your list, e.g., A scoop of delicious candy